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Elias looked out the viewport. The "ship" was a skeleton, its hull breached in a dozen places. The heaters would have failed within hours of the air escaping. Yet, as he traced the number on the valve, he saw something the sensors had missed. Tucked behind the heavy 4110-0092709 assembly was a small, hand-knitted ribbon, faded to a ghost of its original red.

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The metal tag was cold against Elias’s thumb, the stamped digits——clogged with decades of shipyard grease. Elias looked out the viewport

: Give your protagonist a clear desire or a specific burden. through a middle